So I thought I'd post a short kissing scene excerpt. This comes from a sequel I wrote to a book I ended up shelving so this sequel has never passed the 1st draft stage.
“Jessica,” he whispered. I smiled at the sound of his voice and let out
a little moan. “Jessica, open your eyes.”
I opened my eyes. His face was before mine. I grabbed his head, curling
my fingers in his hair and pulled his lips towards mine. I kissed him hungrily,
as if he could somehow quench this thirst I had. A thirst for him.
His lips had never felt so warm against mine. But they were slow,
hesitant. So I pulled him closer, wanting more. My tongue slipped inside his
mouth and he let out a gasp. I could feel his arms braced on either side of me.
I wanted him to touch me. I wanted to feel his need for me like I had for him. I
pulled back and opened my eyes.
Alric squatted in front of me, his face a mixture of shock and distress.
Not the Lord Alric of my dreams.
“Oh, it’s you.”
Ah, I miss this story and characters something fierce. Anyway, I've got three K songs because I couldn't pick, all to do with kissing.
Kiss Me by Ed Sheeran. This song is super smoldery. Ed Sheeran doesn't have an "official music video" so I picked this one because I love the pictures.
Kiss You by One Direction. This song is super fun and so is the video! I'm not ashamed to say that I like to sing along at the TOP OF MY LUNGS.
Kiss You Inside Out by Hedley. This song is super sexy. Enough said.
That is a intense passionate and interesting Kissing scene :)
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I love writing the first kiss scenes or the first hand-holding scenes. I feel like a teenager, too!
ReplyDeleteAdorable! I want to watch you write a kissing scene now lol... New follower, Shawn from Laughing at Life 2
ReplyDeleteHaha, wait, I'm not sure if I understood due to lack of context--did she think she was kissing someone different? Lol. Also, thanks for introducing me to another great Ed Sheeran song. :)
ReplyDeleteI enjoy reading them, but do not enjoy writing them. I always feel like I'm going to veer into cheesy territory. Writers who write kissing well are well appreciated in my eyes.
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed the scene in the book as well as the songs you chose. Have a nice day.
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